Comments on: The Moonborn Code, Part 2 http://scitascienda.com/2010/03/08/the-moonborn-code-part-2/ ScitaScienda.com | C.L. Dyck and Known Associates Thu, 09 Feb 2012 03:23:30 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.com/ By: Serial Story: The Moonborn Code « Scita > Scienda http://scitascienda.com/2010/03/08/the-moonborn-code-part-2/#comment-1922 Tue, 09 Mar 2010 04:26:46 +0000 http://scitascienda.com/?p=3800#comment-1922 [...] Part 2 >> [...]

]]> By: C.L. Dyck http://scitascienda.com/2010/03/08/the-moonborn-code-part-2/#comment-1919 Mon, 08 Mar 2010 20:07:31 +0000 http://scitascienda.com/?p=3800#comment-1919 Hahaha!

I know what you mean — I went over 50,000 words a crit partner sent in about an hour and a half the other night.

“It’s good for you. It builds character.”

~Calvin’s Dad

]]> By: Heather http://scitascienda.com/2010/03/08/the-moonborn-code-part-2/#comment-1918 Mon, 08 Mar 2010 19:43:10 +0000 http://scitascienda.com/?p=3800#comment-1918 Exactly. Have fun! I am certainly enjoying reading it. Plus the slowness of it (as in being posted slowly) is good for my patience says the woman who started reading a 300 page book at 11 and finished it at 2.

]]> By: C.L. Dyck http://scitascienda.com/2010/03/08/the-moonborn-code-part-2/#comment-1917 Mon, 08 Mar 2010 19:36:48 +0000 http://scitascienda.com/?p=3800#comment-1917 I felt like there should be some action to balance the dialogue, but it’s hard to do in under 1000 words, when it’s not a flash piece. I should try to use flash techniques to make this more engaging, I think. Call it a craft exercise.

Then I think, forget all the discipline and training stuff, this one’s to just have fun. :-)

]]> By: Heather http://scitascienda.com/2010/03/08/the-moonborn-code-part-2/#comment-1916 Mon, 08 Mar 2010 15:15:05 +0000 http://scitascienda.com/?p=3800#comment-1916 Oh? I like it. And sometimes we are not thrilled with our work yet it works despite our attitude toward it. (Happens all the time with my paintings. :) ) But it works. More please?

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